| Author | Thread |
|
|
02/19/2010 12:23:49 PM |
Alices critique is spot on, I can't tell you how many times I have submitted a photo and have people start pointing things out and I think "why didn't I SEE that!?"
the two biggest things i have learned here are 'attention to details' and 'lighting' those are huge |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/19/2010 12:45:32 AM |
thank you so much for the comments everyone! they're really helpful, especially from the critique club. i'll definitely keep everything in mind when i'm shooting the next challenge!
Originally posted by smardaz:
i still really enjoy this, and yes you are improving, jump .75 of a point from your last entry!, im gonna fav this, i dig it |
i'm really glad you like it, thanks for favoriting it!! |
|
|
|
02/19/2010 12:34:40 AM |
GREETINGS FROM THE CRITIQUE CLUB
welcome to DPC! Your second entry, and hey, you broke the 5 barrier. Not bad, Alex.
The glee, the exuberance, the sheer fun of this entry entranced our viewer/voters. You comments show this. If you two didn't collapse into a gaggle of giggles after the shoot, I would be surprised.
congratulations on getting your model in pretty good focus in mid-air. Not easy, my friend. Then, I suppose we have to discuss the surroundings. The hot spots, like the lamp & the bedding really have to be handled carefully to take this fun photo out of the snapshot category.
So, my thoughts on this would be to consider your surroundings with care, in this case perhaps remove the lamp from camera view & use dark foreground fabric.
You are telling a story in one photo.
I rather think you will be very good at it when you have a few more technicals under your belt so keep 'em coming.
I hope this little critique is helpful to you.
Alice
|
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/17/2010 12:25:55 AM |
| i still really enjoy this, and yes you are improving, jump .75 of a point from your last entry!, im gonna fav this, i dig it |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
02/16/2010 11:55:23 PM |
| The landing's gunna hurt! |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/16/2010 12:50:25 PM |
| Cool action shot. Almost looks as if she is levitating. Unusual perspective. 5 |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/15/2010 08:55:41 AM |
| lighting makes this look like a snapshot |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/14/2010 04:33:58 AM |
| Great shot, just needed a faster speed, there's some motion blur. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/13/2010 07:26:17 PM |
| despite the snapshot look of this and the distracting b/g....i really love it! love the joyful look on the model, captures the exuberance of youth |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/13/2010 10:21:36 AM |
| Def meets the challenge. This is an interesting shot. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/13/2010 09:26:05 AM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/12/2010 02:09:29 PM |
| something about this doesn't look real - oh....why is her hair not flying? btw, very pretty girl :-) |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/12/2010 12:27:04 PM |
| She is so brave and so cute! lol Hope her landing was safe. :) |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/12/2010 11:44:01 AM |
| Gotta love bed diving. Perhaps a flash might have helped freeze her slightly more and reduced the blur. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/12/2010 10:08:51 AM |
| This fun pose forms a neat composition with the X shape. Good use of perpsective from the ground up. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/10/2010 05:56:48 AM |
| Definitely an interesting perspective! Cool shot. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Prints! -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2024 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/18/2024 09:23:17 PM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
