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03/07/2010 08:38:19 PM |
Feedback from the DPChallenge Critique Club! :D
First of all, this is quite a charming subject, but since the entire photo has a lack of quality, and it wayyyy out of focus, it's hard to really connect with the image. This is quite an interesting setup, however you can't really see the feet of the figures and the rest of the image is filled with a low-detail background. The colors don't really work correctly here and those are the reasons why you didn't get above a 4.5 Lastly, almost always, you want your subject to be facing out into the largest portion of the photo. Like this. Photographers do this because it gives the eye the ability to fill in the rest and complete the tapestry of art the photography communicates. Cropping in a little harder on the right would set this photo to compositional correction. Otherwise, good eye for composition.
I wish I could be more helpful but I just don't see what else to fix in this photo. From your profile I can tell you have a good eye, but I just don't see that in this photo. I hope I was helpful! Message me with any questions you have.
-  ColemanGariety
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02/11/2010 05:11:41 PM |
| There just seems to be something off about this photo but I can't quite put my finger on it. |
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02/10/2010 02:26:58 PM |
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