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Conch012


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Challenge: Perspective VI (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-450D Rebel XSi
Location: Middle of Nowhere
Date: Feb 6, 2010
Aperture: F29
ISO: 800
Shutter: 1/50
Date Uploaded: Feb 8, 2010

Very new to photography, very new to this website, loving everything about both. Looking forward to learning from my mistakes

Statistics
Place: 142 out of 163
Avg (all users): 4.4844
Avg (commenters): 4.0000
Avg (participants): 4.3443
Avg (non-participants): 4.5496
Views since voting: 370
Views during voting: 307
Votes: 192
Comments: 9
Favorites: 0


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02/28/2010 01:23:41 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club

First Impressions:

Was that this really doesnít seem to meet the challenge.

Technical (Comp, lighting, color, focus):


The composition on this seems a bit cluttered, especially with all of the background elements. I would suggest trying to isolate your main subject a bit more to draw the eyes to it.

The lighting is a bit harsh, likely due to time of day and the high iso. I would suggest for this shot to drop the f-stop down around 5.6 or so to get some background blur and definitely lower your iso to 100, especially in bright daylight.

The focus is fine but as already mentioned I would drop the f-stop to get the background out of focus.

Challenge:

This shot really didnít fit the challenge and that is likely why you received numerous 4 and lower votes.

Artistic/Emotion:

N/A

Summary:

If you are new to photography I would suggest reading up on the relation of aperture, shutter speed and iso. Also keep entering challenges, as that is how you will continue to grow. I hope to see more entries from you. If you look at some of the recent ribbon winners you will see that their first entries finished similar to yours.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/16/2010 11:30:28 PM
Well that's one perspective!
02/16/2010 12:56:06 PM
Rather meaningless image with no perspective. 4
02/13/2010 06:52:41 PM
I think a different angle with this would work better, maybe if you could of isolated the skeleton a bit more.
02/13/2010 06:02:27 PM
interesting, i dont see that the perspective adds anything, as it seems to be shot straight on
02/12/2010 08:24:37 PM
Not really seeing "perspective" here. Top of the photo is really blown out probably due to lighting and the time of day when you took the shot. I do like the PP coloring though.
02/12/2010 01:47:25 PM
I like the humour
02/12/2010 11:16:37 AM
seems the theme doesn't fit
02/12/2010 10:12:16 AM
A pretty fun image yet the perspective is somewhat plain as it is shot from straight ahead.


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