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Well, you pleased the crowd that looks at the out-of-the-ordinary and appreciates it!
Congratulations on that.
Technically, your lights and darks are well defined and balanced, you certainly meet the challenge and your framing is fun. I can see a hasty voter looking at this and saying "hmmm, a half & half image; broke a rule there," and giving a low score. But rules are made to be broken (let's call it adjusted) so the one-third/two-third convention needs to be tweaked sometimes.
You did it well, and your work was appreciated by some knowledgeable folk. Not bad, I'd say.
I look forward to seeing more of your work at DPC.