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Srebrna Uroda
Srebrna Uroda
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Pieces of the Human Form (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D700
Lens: Nikon MF Micro-Nikkor 85mm f/2.8D PC
Location: ma basement
Date: Jan 31, 2010
Aperture: 14
ISO: 200
Shutter: 250
Galleries: Portraiture, Advertisement
Date Uploaded: Jan 31, 2010

 This is an earring I made for Anna... after which, we designed a necklace to complete the set.

Srebrna Uroda translates to Silver Beauty from polish.

Statistics
Place: 19 out of 109
Avg (all users): 6.2179
Avg (commenters): 7.1667
Avg (participants): 5.8793
Avg (non-participants): 6.3802
Views since voting: 1658
Views during voting: 341
Votes: 179
Comments: 8
Favorites: 2 (view)

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AuthorThread
 02/09/2010 05:09:00 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club.

First impressions are that this is a classy shot.

Technically this is good. The composition is good although she is a bit close to the frame - as we follow her gaze we hit the frame too soon. Nice tones and exposure. The eyes stand out well and we are drawn to them.

Artistically this is very good. The way the light reflects off the jewellery makes me think this could be an add for the necklace and earring. In that context this would do well, in this challenge it draws away from the human form a bit.

In summary a great shot and it scored a solid 6 so you have to be happy.

Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry
 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/07/2010 11:08:04 PM
Your model is lovely. She has beautiful features and lines. The pose works really well here to accentuate that and great job with the lighting as well. My only nitpick is that the jewlery she wears really stands out too much. The lines they create are also really good and the whole shot is wonderfully composed but they take away from the human form aspect and make it more of a product shot. (no vote)
 02/04/2010 10:52:03 PM
Shows off the jewelry well. Nice lighting.
 02/04/2010 10:16:09 AM
Amazing lighting and composition. To be specific, I like the uniform reflection on the pendant and earrings. Great work on the lighting.
 02/04/2010 05:38:24 AM
nice portrait, good make up
 02/02/2010 01:23:19 AM
beautiful
 02/01/2010 08:41:28 AM
I'd like it much more without the jewelry is our eye goes to it instead of her face. Beautiful lighting.
 02/01/2010 12:30:53 AM
Love how the lighting brings out the jewelry, very nice portrait.


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