This is such an amazing photo, everything works for me here, the angle, the movement, her expression, the story behind it. It's a shame this was basic and you could not take the cable out. My Favorite.
Great implied lines, great colors (except for the sky) and I believe this could be heavily improved with a much tighter crop leaving very little of it.
7*
I really like the idea, great model, lovely execution and light. My only gripe here would be composition, I think that given the subject isn't going to jump any higher than the wall perhaps you could have left the sky out. It is dramatic and well exposed but it seems slightly superfluous and potentially distracting, especially given there is an electricity pylon sticking up into it. Overall I like the shot though.