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02/01/2010 01:44:03 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
First impressions are that the lighting is too harsh and the subject very complicated.
Technically the lighting seems to be the biggest issue. Is it flash lighting? There is nice separation from the background but it is very harsh indeed. The colours are also a little muted.
Artistically the fruit is arranged in an awkward manner that means we struggle to focus on anything in particular.
In summary this has great potential but comes across as more of a snapshot, something DPC voters tend to frown upon.
Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry
Message edited by author 2010-02-01 13:51:23. |
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01/30/2010 09:25:30 PM |
| Nice fruit, nice image -- but perhaps a bit busy (Comment only, no vote) |
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01/30/2010 03:02:34 AM |
| a really nice image i would have boosted the colors to make them really pop the yellow banana's look a bit dull the oranges are great and the kiwi too so maybe just the bananas could have been tweaked a 5 from me |
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01/29/2010 01:26:15 PM |
| Nice arrangement, it makes me hungry! |
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01/28/2010 03:58:01 PM |
| Nice arrrangement. Lighting is a little flat. |
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01/25/2010 07:59:18 PM |
| not enough contrasty light IMHO |
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