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My Orange Garden
My Orange Garden
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Still Life With Fruit (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-500D Rebel T1i
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Location: Iceland/Kopavogur
Date: Jan 22, 2010
Aperture: f/5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 2sec
Galleries: Still Life
Date Uploaded: Jan 22, 2010

made from 3 exposures hdr generated... Taken outside in my garden..

Statistics
Place: 134 out of 141
Avg (all users): 4.3653
Avg (commenters): 4.3333
Avg (participants): 3.9722
Avg (non-participants): 4.6632
Views since voting: 631
Views during voting: 278
Votes: 167
Comments: 4
Favorites: 0


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02/01/2010 01:32:26 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club.

First impressions are that the colours are off. It feels too bright and also a bit confusing.

Technically it seems like the saturation is too high or the HDR tone mapping has gone haywire! Composition is poor as there are orange bits scattered throughout the frame rather than being in an area where our eyes can settle. There are no leading lines to guide us around the placement you have chosen.

Artistically some of the orange pieces look tatty. This couples with the haphazard approach to their placement makes this look like you just threw them down rather than thinking about what a viewer may enjoy.

In summary this shot falls down on both technical and artistic elements and the score reflects that.

Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry

Message edited by author 2010-02-01 13:52:03.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/31/2010 10:55:15 AM
The colors have become nearly unreal.
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01/26/2010 04:08:35 PM
The clarify, highlight/shadow adjustment, or Topaz treatement, really gives this photo a harsh feel. The saturation of blues and yellow/greens are over the top a bit also. Cute idea...just pushed a little too far in post IMO. Good luck in the challenge.
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01/25/2010 03:51:17 AM
The orange slice looks as if it's dried up a bit. Also it is not too attractive. Love the greens.
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