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01/22/2010 10:56:35 PM |
GREETINGS FROM THE CRITIQUE CLUB
Yes, you have a lovely little girl there and her red costume fits the scene nicely as does that translucent umbrella with the red trim.
Others have mentioned that it would be nice to have more light on her face so I won't dwell on that. I will suggest that you look at this image cropped so that all that empty sky to the left goes away. That includes most of the ugly airplane con-trail. Since this is Advanced Editing, you could clone out any remainder. That would bring the focus to the little girl which is where you want it. You could also concentrate on bringing out the depth of the clouds behind her that have so much majesty. (If it was mine, I'd probably not lighten the area behind her quite so much, but that is an individual thing.)
You live in a beautiful city and a beautiful land that I remember with great fondness from a visit there some years ago.
I'll look forward to seeing more of your work. |
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01/19/2010 06:09:56 PM |
| I like the coloring and upward POV. A bit more light on the face perhaps. |
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01/17/2010 05:53:17 AM |
| A beautifull photo, but I would like to see some form of fill light lighting her face abit. Lovely little girl =) |
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01/13/2010 01:07:10 AM |
| great perspective...the highlights are quite blown out though 6 |
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