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01/10/2010 11:54:06 PM |
Originally posted by ErikV:
I like his direct look. Handsome young man. Focal plane seems a bit off and/or not deep enough, I would like to see the eyes (actually the whole top of his face) be sharper to match the lips and cheeks. |
yeah something strange going on here with the focus, seems weird to have the lower have in focus and the upper oof, usually happens from front to back... |
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01/10/2010 10:27:08 AM |
| Pretty effective but your lighting, the pose and your crop / composition don't add too much interest. Just small changes to each would have allowed this pretty good portrait to be better. |
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01/08/2010 07:24:03 PM |
| I like his direct look. Handsome young man. Focal plane seems a bit off and/or not deep enough, I would like to see the eyes (actually the whole top of his face) be sharper to match the lips and cheeks. |
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