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Blue moon
tinkie2010


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: The Moon (Advanced Editing VII*)
Camera: Nikon D700
Lens: Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 80-400mm f/4.5-5.6D ED VR
Location: Umhlanga
Date: Dec 30, 2009
Aperture: 8
ISO: 250
Shutter: 1
Galleries: Nature, Astrophotography
Date Uploaded: Dec 30, 2009

Taken at night. Basic editing was done. Tripod was used.

Statistics
Place: 48 out of 72
Avg (all users): 4.8509
Avg (commenters): 4.4000
Avg (participants): 4.3500
Avg (non-participants): 4.9362
Views since voting: 664
Views during voting: 487
Votes: 275
Comments: 7
Favorites: 2 (view)


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AuthorThread
02/03/2010 09:27:13 AM
Hi Marna, greetings from the Critique Club!

First of all, don't be discouraged by your score / placing in this challenge. You can only do it better next Moon challenge :)

Composition
Nothing to be said here. You respected the rule of thirds, and although it was a very plain shot (no clouds, distinguishable features any than the moon) it was very effective.

Settings
It seems to my eye that the focus on the moon was a weeeeee bit off. I assume that you were at the long end of your lens (that has peak sharpness at f/11 @400mm), and it's very difficult to focus like this.
Since you had a tripod, you could have used live view and zoomed in to focus exactly where it would be sharp.

Processing
If you shot in RAW, you could try to use Recovery to gain some lost details on the white, and then selectively burn some parts of the image, so the craters would be enhanced.

If you have any questions feel free to contact me.
Regards,
Joao
 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/12/2010 05:31:36 AM
Nice blue background
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01/10/2010 10:02:57 PM
Love when features are visible on the moon. Feels a bit tight, maybe just a tish more space around it? Not voting.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/09/2010 10:36:55 PM
Nice comp, the image is a little too bright causing loss of detail, 5.
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01/08/2010 11:09:05 AM
Lacks a bit of definition, good exposure though.
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01/07/2010 11:37:02 PM
ok
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01/06/2010 04:26:26 AM
A little overexposed, but decent.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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