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01/08/2010 09:12:01 AM |
| Very pretty model and I like where you were trying to go with this. But the harsh lighting especially noticeable on her arm really detracts. Also, I think the composition really prevents us from focusing on her face and eyes, which really is what makes a woman sexy in my book. I think here instead, the composition and lighting make the primary focus her open jacket and her bosom. |
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01/08/2010 05:15:15 AM |
in reply to one of the comments the definition of Vamp = A woman who uses her sex appeal to entrap and exploit men.
In British English and traditional American English usage, a tramp is a long term homeless person who travels from place to place as an itinerant vagrant, traditionally walking or hiking all year round.
I assume the version of tramp that you talk about is the following , swinger: a person who engages freely in promiscuous sex , now why would you think that , wishful thinking ? |
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01/06/2010 06:20:25 AM |
| Because of how dark her attire is, a white background might be more appropriate to help separate her from it. Her expression looks slightly uneasy and awkward. |
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01/03/2010 12:19:01 AM |
| Light is a bit harsh for me. |
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01/02/2010 08:43:43 PM |
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01/02/2010 06:41:54 PM |
| I read the title and you completely lose me. Not that it had much to go on in the first place. There should be more contrast or at least a highlight along the hat so the viewer doesn't lose it into the background. It appears to be direct light which loses any depth of character. .... The Vamp. I would like to ask what here makes you see 'vamp'? Though I also need to ask what do you think a 'vamp' is? No judgment on the model, Or attacks, just observation of character portrayed within the image... The Tramp, may be a better title. More believable because of the wardrobe choice. Remember this has nothing to do with the model personally, only the visual of the image in front of me. |
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01/01/2010 05:19:23 AM |
| Has your daughter seen what you've titled this lol. Nice shot |
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01/01/2010 05:09:44 AM |
| Your model didn't feel very comfortable, I'm afraid. Make her smile next time. Lighting is a bit harsh, try a reflector from right side. besides that, a black bra would have fit better. |
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