Nice composition and lighting, I like the pose and the strobist style in here.
Mybae some fill on her right side of the face and some dodge on here eyes would improve it.
Very well done,
First impression: Something about the blinds reminds me of a 90's movie. I like the expression on the models face. but the converging lines are a little distracting.
Suggested improvement: I might try a boost in exposure or brightness just a bit.
I love the blinds and shadows... this is a terrific looking, untraditional pose/portait that is really working for me. Her piano stuff is great!! I hope maybe she's thinking of putting this picture on her website (has a much more jazzy feel - to match her playing - than anything else there now).
wow, so cool to get to work with a known talent, loved her music on the site, i am really a fan of jazz, she is beautiful and you did a nice job of capturing that, the horizontal/vertical lines make this a great shot
beautifully classic, clean, and simple shot. the lines are pleasing, there are vertical ones, and horizontal which makes it easy for the eyes to travel across the frame. I like this.