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12/18/2009 08:26:28 AM |
| Excellent composition and tones. I like the light and lines created by the concrete structures. |
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12/16/2009 07:59:35 AM |
| I like the composition, but don't much get the title.....6 |
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12/15/2009 08:11:09 AM |
| very good work here, compliments, i like it... |
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12/15/2009 12:58:40 AM |
| I don't quite understand the title. By standing on the tracks, it makes me think of the train is "yet to come." No vote, I'm in this one. |
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12/14/2009 03:35:38 PM |
| The b/w tones are not supporting the message to me. I'm drawn to the white shoes and streaks of sun on the back wall, but not sure what they add to the story. I usually assume it is my own ignorance in cases like this :) |
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12/14/2009 12:47:27 PM |
| Greater things are still to be done, In this city :) Nice shot. The model being "flat" to the picture instead of turned at a slight angle hides the Bible (assuming that I'm right and that's really what it is). He's also positioned so that the block behind his head makes his hair look odd. The stance on the railroad tracks looks uncomfortable for reading; I would have put him in a more natural position so that the pose looked less forced. Good luck! 8 |
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