You got ripped off! This is a great shot that should heave scored much higher (IMO). The DOF, focus, framing the loco with the two cars; it all works really well. Nice work! :)
Ah, I got it. I was thinking that it was depicting one train pulling the other, then I saw the text. I'm not sure if you want that as the focus of this shot. Or do you? I like the framing of trains on trains. I think more of the bottom could have been cropped off. Nice job.
I'm unsure what the subject is. My eye wants to look at the red in the center. But as the majority of the frame is filled with the cars in the foreground, as well as pointed to in the title, I'm assuming that was the subject? Too dark, and too much going on in the background to keep my eye where you intended.