Excellent photo, but you got hammered 'cos its not in the 'middle'. See my earlier comments about that. Centred doesn't mean in the middle :) Well not to me anyway!
The tones in the sky are diverse and beautifully tinged with multiple shades of light. The title is very appropriate to the much smaller shadowed building as natural Heaven is much more vast than the manmade structure, an appropriate analogy perhaps on a greater scale.
I'm not sure if just having the subject (silhoutte of the building) centred horizontally is enough. Especially in this case where it creates a lot of dead space.
I like the rays of lights and the mood created by the shades of colour. Perhaps not the best perspective of the building either with the turrets overlapping each other.
This may be getting DNMC because it is not in the 'middle' and it's low down, however it IS centred on the low third. Beautiful capture, title, silhouette, light. High score from me.