It would work better with focus on the first one. THe lighting is good. Composition could be improved if you could have tilted your camera a little to the left. 4.
Cool idea. I like the ways they progress downwards at an angle. I wonder if a more steep angle and more overlap between them would have created more impact. Vignette is not to my taste here.
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