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The Wedding
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Challenge: Centered Composition IV (Basic Editing)
Camera: Olympus E-510
Lens: Olympus 35mm f/3.5 Macro ED Zuiko Digital
Location: Jakarta, Indonesia
Date: Nov 15, 2009
Aperture: F/22
ISO: ISO 100
Shutter: 0.8s
Galleries: Still Life, Wedding
Date Uploaded: Nov 15, 2009

 These are wedding gifts from my friends, except the fan. I try to combine them and make a fine art.

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 11/30/2009 02:46:15 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

As a previous commenter indicated there is just too much going on in this image. Yes it is central but there is no subject per se. Your eye is taken all over the frame. Simple is always better. For a staged shot like this start with one item or element and add to it incrementally. All of these items are interesting by themselves but together they compete for the viewers interest making chaos. Looking through your profile your image "Butterflies" works well because it is simple.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/24/2009 01:48:22 PM
to me this is just way to busy...
 11/22/2009 09:55:59 AM
This image works well for centered composition ..good luck
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