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11/07/2009 06:02:08 PM |
| A nice pose, but the smile feels very unnatural. Too forced. Also, I'm not sure I like how she's situated in the frame. There's too much space to her right, with no real subject there to add counterpoint or balance. In fact, it feels like a void -- like someone should be there but left. Nice lighting. |
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11/07/2009 04:14:44 AM |
Nice scenery to do a portrait in but for me theres a couple of things wrong with the shot. The first and most striking is the expression, it's a forced and unnatural smile, as if she's been holding it for too long.
The lighting is also a little flat, perhaps from being front on, and it's managed to make the fence stand out in a slightly unnatural way. |
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11/03/2009 07:58:30 PM |
| Nice composition and I like the setting. Her face, however, strikes me as being out of focus |
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11/02/2009 09:14:53 PM |
| Nice portrait and model, the title is odd. |
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11/02/2009 06:00:11 PM |
| nice shot but would have looked great if she filled more of the frame a 7 from me |
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