I absolutely love the tone here - such a wonderful country Americana homey feeling. Excellent lighting - but just a hair underexposed. 8 (would be a 10 if you bumped up the exposure for a little more "pop".
the lighting kills this shot, its too flat. Moreover little details like the top of the pictures showing white, and the fact that the stripes are not aligned properly dont help. I personally would like to see the stripes alternating in the second shot with the 1st and 3rd. The view from above is also not too inspiring, as it lacks a 3d impact.
You'll probably get a lot of comments about how this is underexposed.... but I actually like the exact brightness you have here. It seems to somehow enrich the colors. Perhaps just one of them should have a brighter exposure? Clever concept though, and good work. What if the last one had a person eating the pie?
great story! it seems a little dull.. the "whites" show as a little too dark creamy to me. and although i like the stripes as a linking theme in the images, it seems a little overpowering in these.