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Great attempt at a very difficult task. The bottom pane is very nice - I like the lighting and highlight of the bird's head / neck. Perhaps could lose a good deal of the tree at the far right of the bottom pane. Pan motion is very difficult - especially with a bird, and both of your top frames are OOF. Top left, the bird is almost in silhouette - without the one wing, it would almost look like a shadow. Top right pane, bird is still OOF, and its head is lost in the background. |