DPChallenge: A Digital Photography Contest You are not logged in. (log in or register
 
Challenge Entries
Portfolio Images
This image is not part of a public portfolio.
STEVE
STEVE
jnix1asdf


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Low Key IV (Basic Editing)
Camera: HP PhotoSmart M425
Location: rogers arkansas bedroom
Date: Oct 3, 2009
Galleries: Emotive, DPChallenge GTGs
Date Uploaded: Oct 5, 2009

First time doing anything with lighting. It's not that great but I would love any usful comments.

Statistics
Place: 222 out of 225
Avg (all users): 3.7396
Avg (commenters): 4.0000
Avg (participants): 3.5313
Avg (non-participants): 3.8667
Views since voting: 696
Views during voting: 249
Votes: 169
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


Please log in or register to add your comments!

AuthorThread
10/14/2009 10:34:59 PM
FWIW (probably not much) - lighting is too much. Try using a lesser light source, or moving it further away from the subject, or putting a filtering material between the source and subject (even a white piece of paper in front of the light will cut it a lot, but you can also use a white translucent piece of plastic - like a thin cutting board). At least you didn't do my mistake of camera too close and use the on-camera flash, with harsh front-on lighting and a very distinct shadow on the background. Interesting subject, and interesting use of the hat and necklace - the brown contrast with the green of the statue. Keep playing around with it, try different things and see what you like.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/13/2009 04:46:14 PM
Not sure I'd call it low key. Startling and original all the same.
10/11/2009 03:18:54 PM
Looks nothing like me. I don't even like those kind of hats.
10/08/2009 07:38:32 PM
Meets Challenge: 2 of 3. This is really borderline for me. The super bright lower corner is almost too much.
Technical: 1 of 3. Lower right is way overblown, and it feels as though the whole image is out of focus.
Emotion: 1 of 3. I like the little cap, makes the otherwise rigid statue a little more whimsical. But otherwise, it's just not doin' it for me.
Awe: 0 of 1.
10/08/2009 06:55:42 AM
Too much light, kind of blown out to me.
10/08/2009 01:50:22 AM
the white light is very harsh. You could try diffusing it with a piece of paper. You could also try moving the light source slighty more forward of the subject.
The subject also seems a bit out of focus.
10/07/2009 04:47:20 PM
This is not


Home - Challenges - Community - League - Photos - Cameras - Lenses - Learn - Prints! - Help - Terms of Use - Privacy - Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2024 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/25/2024 05:09:49 AM EDT.