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Twisted Twist Ties
Twisted Twist Ties
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Challenge: Twisted II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-450D Rebel XSi
Lens: Canon EF 100mm f/2.8 USM Macro
Location: Counter
Date: Sep 29, 2009
Aperture: 14
ISO: 800
Shutter: 1.3
Galleries: Abstract, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Sep 29, 2009

 Twist ties twisted together through twisting. Their tint, Black tethered to White

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Place: 110 out of 155
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Views since voting: 636
Views during voting: 240
Votes: 157
Comments: 4
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/06/2009 08:23:50 AM
First thought on this? What's the smear/nick/mark on the front center white area? Then I see sensor spots that could have been cleaned in post-processing. So, out the gate, I'm leaning on the downside. That sets me up for seeing the downfalls rather than the positives as I continue to take in your photo. Other observations that will help for your next entry are to use a lower ISO to control the noise, and diffuse the lighting to eliminate harsh glare.

The point I'm trying to make is that first impressions are important, and attention to details will improve the viewers first look and impact opinions.

All JMO of course. Good luck in the challenge!
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 10/01/2009 03:35:30 AM
Meets the challenge, but is somewhat unappealing. When doing a setup shot, clean the objects to keep them free of unwanted distractions. You can also, in basic, clone or heal dust spots.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 09/30/2009 04:44:31 PM
*not voting as I'm in this challenge-just commenting since I've seen requests for comments in the challenge thread*

I like this shot in theory. It could use some more editing though. Advanced would be better to get rid of that yellowish thing in the foreground but as that wasn't the case it could still use some sensor dust removal, more contrast and whiter whites.

HTH
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 09/30/2009 11:38:39 AM
i like the use of the shallow dof and the B&W in colour of that makes sense
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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