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Challenge: Twisted II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-500D Rebel T1i
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Location: Palm Springs, CA
Date: Sep 27, 2009
Aperture: f/1.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/160
Galleries: Abstract, Blur
Date Uploaded: Sep 28, 2009

Thanks Tawna

Statistics
Place: 144 out of 155
Avg (all users): 4.3718
Avg (commenters): 4.5714
Avg (participants): 4.4286
Avg (non-participants): 4.3458
Views since voting: 646
Views during voting: 306
Votes: 156
Comments: 9
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/06/2009 03:54:12 PM
1st time I'm voting... would have voted higher if model had a more macarbre gothic look.
10/04/2009 08:20:25 AM
With people I prefer to have focus on their eyes. The picture of the wire and her mouth alone would've been interesting as well :)
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10/03/2009 03:54:36 PM
Nice soft tones, but I'm not keen on the model's expression (as pretty as she is).
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10/02/2009 03:57:31 PM
A bit dark, both literally and subject-wise.
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10/01/2009 08:20:35 PM
The focus point landed on the wire just infront of her face.
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10/01/2009 04:05:43 PM
interesting take on subject, would prefer focus throughout as the point of focus of the image tongue/steel is oof. colors seem a bit mute
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10/01/2009 02:34:50 PM
*not voting as I'm in this challenge-just commenting since I've seen requests for comments in the challenge thread*

Interesting. I think this would be better if you cropped out the light spot to the left of the frame and then cropped in on the right to get a close up of her face and the barbed wire so then you could have lightened this all up in editing without blowing out that light in the upper left hand corner. It just suffers from being too dark in the face and possibly not as sharp as could be.

HTH
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09/30/2009 11:37:56 AM
Good idea and composition but it just comes over as a snapshot IMO
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09/30/2009 01:04:04 AM
nice concept.. if the focus was on the twisted wire a bit more, it would have helped!
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