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Challenge: Twisted II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Kodak CX7330
Lens: Canon EF-S 17-85mm f/4-5.6 IS USM
Location: my house
Date: Sep 25, 2009
Aperture: 11
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/1000
Galleries: Still Life, Macro
Date Uploaded: Sep 25, 2009

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10/02/2009 01:03:55 PM
Subject choice is ok. Technicals (focus, exposure, etc...) are fine. I'd probably lose the base and tighten it up some (lose a little of the negative space). All JMO of course. Good luck!
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09/30/2009 11:10:59 AM
great color and lighting and contrast, would just like to see a slightly different composition.. looks like you were trying for the rule of thirds but were a little close to center... try making a making the bulb a little smaller and a smidge to the left with a few extra inches of black added to the top of the picture making the bulb around 1/3 the hieght of the pic. i would love to have captured this the way you did though.
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09/30/2009 08:00:34 AM
You did good on this shot. I tried something similar and it turned out bad so I did not enter. Nice exposure between the light and the dark background. That is hard to do. Your light is slightly off center. Whether by design or not, I don't know. I would say a square crop without as much negative space would be more compelling.
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