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10/02/2009 01:03:55 PM |
| Subject choice is ok. Technicals (focus, exposure, etc...) are fine. I'd probably lose the base and tighten it up some (lose a little of the negative space). All JMO of course. Good luck! |
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09/30/2009 11:10:59 AM |
| great color and lighting and contrast, would just like to see a slightly different composition.. looks like you were trying for the rule of thirds but were a little close to center... try making a making the bulb a little smaller and a smidge to the left with a few extra inches of black added to the top of the picture making the bulb around 1/3 the hieght of the pic. i would love to have captured this the way you did though. |
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09/30/2009 08:00:34 AM |
| You did good on this shot. I tried something similar and it turned out bad so I did not enter. Nice exposure between the light and the dark background. That is hard to do. Your light is slightly off center. Whether by design or not, I don't know. I would say a square crop without as much negative space would be more compelling. |
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