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10/03/2009 06:30:37 AM |
Hello, I gave you a 4 on this one. I think, overall, the image is too messy and not appealing enough.
A few suggestions:
- B&W could have been an better option for this subject, which has to have it more from the structure and lines, then from color.
- A shallower DOF would have blurred out the background more. Now the seats and tables distract from the subject and the don't add any value.
- Emphasizing the symmetry of the subject could have made this image more appealing, for instance by leveling (the vertical pole straight and the center of the white squares horizontally aligned.
Off course: this is just the humble opinion of another amateur ;-)
Hope this helped a bit... |
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10/02/2009 10:39:44 AM |
| Nice, but not really interesting enough. The background's a bit busy for me, and there isn't enough contrast in the subject. Great subject sharpness. |
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09/28/2009 08:50:15 PM |
| Good eye finding tis, but overall the picture isn't really interesting More of a snapshot, as the composition isn't really that great. |
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