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10/08/2009 03:47:02 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
My thoughts on the image: This one nicely fits into the challenge, and I love the detail you captured on the skin. My mind can almost feel the smoothness and warmth that is surely contained there. I do not, however, like the plastic animals. This isn't to say that I don't like the idea. I like the penguins that Magnus used in his presentation, and Allan Teger's work is both amazing and inspiring to me. He really is brilliant in his imagination and ideas.
My ideas for improvement: I'd like to have seen this one presented with more of an Alan Teger style and a better choice of toy animals. I also think that a monochrome presentation would have served this one better than color.
Where I would have/did score this entry: I didn't vote in the nude challenge this round as I have spent far too much time at work lately. With that in mind, I would have most likely agreed with the voters. As you have presented the image here, I would have given it a 4 or 5. With more attention to the animals and monochrome post-processing, I think this one would have pulled a better score.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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10/01/2009 11:54:55 PM |
Cool Allan Teger-style shot! I did one of those for this challenge 4 years ago, it's now my most fave'd and viewed photo... 10!
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10/01/2009 10:33:48 AM |
| Doesn't work for me as a nude. Sorry. 3 |
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09/30/2009 11:39:28 PM |
| Good idea but that's steal the topic "Nude" |
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09/30/2009 05:24:01 PM |
| They both have their coats on. |
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09/30/2009 07:43:21 AM |
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09/29/2009 09:35:04 PM |
| Great piss take - that's Irish for good humor... and sheep are sometimes a first resort there :) |
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09/29/2009 05:12:53 PM |
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09/28/2009 05:51:02 PM |
| I have to say I love the lighting. The lighing here is great. The skin looks great. I love how you can see the goosebumps on the butt. And it could have been an amazing shot. It's just a litte weird and disturbing. |
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09/28/2009 01:01:19 PM |
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09/28/2009 12:13:03 PM |
| Hehe, pretty clever, I like it. Perhaps if the backround was a piece of paper with a gradient from yellow to orange, it would have looked more like a natural sunset scene. |
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09/27/2009 04:21:40 PM |
| Love this image, well done |
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09/27/2009 06:34:21 AM |
| uhm...... strange .... very strange.... but hey its good to be challenged. |
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09/27/2009 02:13:10 AM |
| I like the texture in your model's skin.. she must have been pretty chilly, you should have warmed the rocks first! (lol) An interesting take on the challenge and I gave you an extra point for creativity. |
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09/26/2009 01:33:07 AM |
| Now, this is a different choice rather than just a breast or pair of...shows creativity for sure! Your coloring and detail are good! |
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09/25/2009 11:33:00 PM |
| Lighting is kind of harsh in the background. |
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09/25/2009 09:05:54 PM |
| Somtimes, you just don't want to know.... |
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09/25/2009 03:51:28 PM |
| Very creative composition. I like the graduant in the sky. |
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09/25/2009 11:51:41 AM |
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09/25/2009 02:25:10 AM |
I looked at the wolf. I looked at the sheep. I looked at the rocks. And then I thought "Did they even know what the challenge topic was???" and as I was about to click the 2, I noticed something. :)
...so, no 2 for you. :D |
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09/25/2009 12:32:48 AM |
| cute n simple. would have liked to see a bit more of the models back maybe. well done regardless. |
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