There's something aggressive about this picture that is unsettling and that can be a good thing depending on what the photographer is trying to say - this doesn't say tease to me, it says payback time.... a provocative capture, either way... black and white might have been cool to use
Really? To me, it looks like somebody should be calling the cops or the fashion police. Or maybe I'm just getting too old...? The photo looks a little dark and I think it could be cropped a little tighter so we could see the facial expressions better. And maybe get away from the corner of the room.
This makes me wonder what is going on. A play, perhaps? A couple of big problems I must mention:
-composition needs some croppping. There is a lot of empty wall space on both sides that does nothing for the image. A tighter crop on the sides would aid.
-Heavy compression is creating visible artifacts outlining both of the people. Compression kills detail. Always use the least compression you can get away with and still come in under challenge limits. Most image editors have that ability to adjust compression somewhere in the file save dialog.
-His pants are falling down. (C'mon, you have to expect that comment from someone over 40)