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09/22/2009 06:29:57 PM |
| Nicely lit, but overall its doesn't do anything for me. |
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09/17/2009 05:48:06 AM |
| This is a tough one to offer critique and suggestion. First of all, I have no idea what I am looking at, so it is difficult for me to relate to the subject or understand how it should look. Next, it just seems like a snapshot of an odd object with 9 levels on a store shelf; or perhaps 9 objects. I do appreciate that the focal plan is where my eye agrees with it. I don't care for the centered composition in this one, especially with the empty area below and to the right of the subject. That creates a hole and drags my eye right into it. I do like the lighting and colors you captured on the subject. That adds a good deal of interest even without knowing what I am looking at. Even with the interest, there are many flaws that detract from the score. I see it as a 3. |
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