Nice nice nice haha i love on-white portraits, infact i took a whole bunch of them of my family recently, this is very cute and jaded_housewife did make a great point!
i gotta say, I love the clean background, it really makes the subject the SUBJECT. She's awesome. That face.. its just perfect. I love this image, its great!
I didn't vote in the challenge since I was in it and I never vote in challenges I participate it but I did think it was super cute and original. One thing that would have made it better for me would have been if your title was "Mommy makes me pull my hair". Would have made the I love daddy shirt soooooooo much funnier. Even better if she was sitting in front of a plate of peas or something with mommy pointing as if telling her to eat them. something like that. Just to give the photo a story. Hoestly, TONS of my pictures don't have stories. Just trying to troubleshoot why it scored low.
HTH.
I so agree with you about the name, Mommy in the title Daddy on the shirt would've made it stronger and more appealing :) Thanks for you suggestion, it is indeed a wonderful point,
Regards :)
I didn't vote in the challenge since I was in it and I never vote in challenges I participate in but I did think it was super cute and original. One thing that would have made it better for me would have been if your title was "Mommy makes me pull my hair". Would have made the I love daddy shirt soooooooo much funnier. Even better if she was sitting in front of a plate of peas or something with mommy pointing as if telling her to eat them. something like that. Just to give the photo a story. Honestly, TONS of my pictures don't have stories. Just trying to troubleshoot why it scored low.
HTH.
I might have thought this a bit of a shoehorn, but wouldn't have ignored how technically good it was. It's very well composed also -- obviously not candid, but your subject is relaxed and acting natural and having fun. And she's cute. Probably a five or six from me if I had voted.
People seeing it as DNMC was the only reason it scored so low. Even if you shot this specifically for the challenge, voters will perceive something like this as a shoehorn of the cute shot that you want to show off. It got a 7 from me, and I also recognized your kid as soon as she came up on the screen. What a little cutie!
Thanks Steve for your honest feed back, kind people like you makes staying here really worth it. I thought the lines, either straight or curls are obvious, but I think I was mistaken,
Thanks once again and see ya at HDR :)
I thought this was funny. Is she yours? Are those natural curls? What a beautiful little girl! Pull this photo out when she turns 16 lol.
Hi Michelle, good to recieve from you, yep, she is mine :) Sarah is going to turn 2 next January, and she is the the super model in my one and only ribbon picture :)
People seeing it as DNMC was the only reason it scored so low. Even if you shot this specifically for the challenge, voters will perceive something like this as a shoehorn of the cute shot that you want to show off. It got a 7 from me, and I also recognized your kid as soon as she came up on the screen. What a little cutie!
Very cute! Learning to be a model so soon! The kid looks like she enjoys being a little ham. Might be getting beat up by others for the lines not being the major subject.
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