Hi from the Critique Club,
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I looooooooove this, I think it is really good. You have managed to bring a whole new line concept to your photos!.
I think that this is a brilliant anbstract of what can be done, I think just a little more contrast at your background would bring out the lines even more.
I really like this, I think it should have scored higher than it did for artistic merit |