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09/10/2009 09:41:03 PM |
Hi from the Critique Club,
You asked for your shot to have an in depth comment from a member of the Critique Club.
This looks like a fun shot!!!
they eyes on this person seem very kind and fun! You had an excellent idea here, using the pasta as a fan. There is not a lot here that can be improved on it is a nice shot, maybe next time use a darker background as this would pop the pasta, eyes and skin.
You could have gone with more saturation with her eyes, there is a wonderful tutorial on here about eyes, have a look as I think this shot could do with a pop. Whether it be her eyes, the pasta or eyes.
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09/05/2009 12:23:12 PM |
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09/03/2009 10:47:42 AM |
| this to me is not a terrible picture at all...it just doesn't have some of the pop that the others have...I gave you a 7 |
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09/01/2009 05:56:33 PM |
| Cute! Lighting seems a bit flat? |
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08/31/2009 12:53:56 AM |
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