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Challenge: Abstract Macro III (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Signs
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Location: Tranquility, NJ
Date: Aug 22, 2009
Aperture: 4.5
ISO: 200
Shutter: 200
Galleries: Abstract, Macro
Date Uploaded: Aug 23, 2009

 A caterpillar tent on the branch of a walnut tree.

upped the contrast with curves, then upped the saturation with hue/sat... might as well give it some colors.

I would love to see an abstract macro on my profile page... what do you mean I'm setting myself for another disappointment?? How DARE you??

What do you know, anyway?

Statistics
Place: 123 out of 177
Avg (all users): 5.1168
Avg (commenters): 4.0000
Avg (participants): 4.9437
Avg (non-participants): 5.3030
Views since voting: 793
Views during voting: 236
Votes: 137
Comments: 5
Favorites: 0

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AuthorThread
 09/01/2009 08:13:09 PM
Hi from the Critique Club,

You asked for your shot to have an in depth comment from a member of the Critique Club.

I don't know a lot but I can give you what I think. It is not macro enough, and I think in your comments you even know that. Now if there was something huge like a tiny section of the bark (walnut trees are smooth bark though) then that would have given the viewer an idea as to how small these things actually are.

My eye is searching for one focal point, and i am getting three of them, one south, one west and one north. There are also some sun bubbles that direct your eye straight to them.

You are sharp in your 3 areas though which is good, the background is a little busy but there is an attempt at bokeh in there (I think). Some contrast to give it some depth would have been helpful as it would have popped the web out

I gave you a six on this shot when i voted, as I did like it

  Photographer found comment helpful.
 08/31/2009 10:37:46 AM
I like this and it looks abstract to me. maybe next time :~)
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/27/2009 05:31:56 AM
Beautyful picture, BUT, an abstract image is not representing or imitating external reality or the objects of nature
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 08/25/2009 06:56:40 PM
you have the abstract part with all the converging lines, but I'm not sure about the macro...it seems like you could get much closer???
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 08/24/2009 09:44:47 PM
Funny title..good photo.
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