Hi from the C Club
YOu asked for an in depth comment on your shot.
1st impression, it is very out of focus. try moving back from the subject when you have to go macro with your lens. you can zoom in in Photoshop to get what you are after. Some contrast to separate things would have helped as well. Flipping the canvas so that it was on the bottom looking up would have been more pleasing the eye
good try, |