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08/27/2009 01:09:14 PM |
Hi from the C Club,
You asked for an indepth review of your shot in a challenge.
This is a nice macro shot!
Unless I read your title I would have had no idea as to what I was looking at! You did shoot this very well. I am finding that I am tilting my head to make it centered though, so a tighter crop on the left hand side to center it would have helped with this.
You have a good DOF going on here starting at the handle (?) and leading our eyes to the center. You did well with your light bounce as well.
There is not a lot you could have done in post processing that you didn't all ready do, but maybe just a little more contrast to give it some depth.
Overall, the comments that you received are pretty much spot on.
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08/25/2009 09:34:20 PM |
| I like your symmetry and your focus |
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08/24/2009 02:55:21 PM |
| A little too symmetrical for my taste... Nice subject |
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08/22/2009 10:48:49 AM |
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08/21/2009 09:02:54 PM |
| I like and angle and the DOF. I like the lighting. Perhaps cropping out the upper third would give a stronger composition. |
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08/21/2009 12:25:26 PM |
| Nice focus and lighting, 6 |
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08/19/2009 12:52:13 PM |
| Sharp with a nicely shallow DOF, but it just doesn't speak to me. 6 |
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08/19/2009 04:31:48 AM |
| Nice idea, but difficult to pull off well. |
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08/19/2009 02:59:30 AM |
| I don't know why this picture doesn't work for me. It's a nice perspective and a decent execution, maybe because it isn't completely centered, maybe more contrast or harsher light would have helped, 5 |
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