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Challenge: Pink II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-450D Rebel XSi
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Location: Belgium
Date: Aug 15, 2009
Aperture: F10
ISO: 800
Shutter: 0.04
Galleries: Still Life
Date Uploaded: Aug 16, 2009

 I did this shot in my apartment with natural light. Background is a white paper. I wanted to highlight the similarity of the two shapes and colors.

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Place: 125 out of 161
Avg (all users): 4.4790
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 4.0185
Avg (non-participants): 4.6991
Views since voting: 685
Views during voting: 262
Votes: 167
Comments: 5
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 08/26/2009 02:23:36 PM
Thank you so much for your comment and for your suggestions! This is really helpful to me, I'm starting in this field.

Thank you!!

Maria

Originally posted by JulietNN:
Hi from the C Club

You asked for an in depth comment on your shot! I was one of your 7's in this shot and here is the reason why.

I liked that you thought out of the boxx in this one, it is just not the shell or the cup. you saw two objects and realized that they complimented each other. The round smooth curves of each of them lend the selves to this shot. There are several things that could have been done a little differently though that may have helped your score somewhat.

In post processing, boosting the exposure, brightness will have helped with the white that is a little grey here. Unsharp Mask would have made this a little sharper. I see that you ISO is very high and this accounts for the grain that can be seen. A faster shutter speed of more natural light would have helped this .

You did well with the shadows they are soft and inviting, well done!
08/26/2009 10:10:45 AM
Hi from the C Club

You asked for an in depth comment on your shot! I was one of your 7's in this shot and here is the reason why.

I liked that you thought out of the boxx in this one, it is just not the shell or the cup. you saw two objects and realized that they complimented each other. The round smooth curves of each of them lend the selves to this shot. There are several things that could have been done a little differently though that may have helped your score somewhat.

In post processing, boosting the exposure, brightness will have helped with the white that is a little grey here. Unsharp Mask would have made this a little sharper. I see that you ISO is very high and this accounts for the grain that can be seen. A faster shutter speed of more natural light would have helped this .

You did well with the shadows they are soft and inviting, well done!

  Photographer found comment helpful.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/24/2009 09:53:02 PM
Neat comparison.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 08/21/2009 12:32:36 AM
YES, OPERATOR, IM LOOKING FOR SOME PINK????
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 08/19/2009 11:23:30 AM
Great lighting, no harsh shadows are cast by the objects. You have great vision, but to me this is just not very interesting as a photo.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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