Greetings from Andi via the Critique Club
First Impression: At first glance this is a little boring although the shadows and textures work well, quite interesting but nothing that captures my eye.
Composition:Reading your notes you didn't actually make a tunnel or cave however that doesn't bother me too much as your shot leads me into what 'could' be a tunnel, the oof focus right hand stone helps the overal depth of the image for me.
Subject: Whilst I see a tunnel I don't feel as if I'm entering a tunnel if you see what I mean? Yes, you took time to construct something just for the challenge and thats always good in my books, its just that it seems to missing the main focal point.
Technical:Love the colours, a great dof of field and shadows though some of the lighter areas are a little overexposed.
Final thoughts: Overall I think this was worth more than its 4.9 and slipping over a 5 would have been about right for me. A decent shot that lacks any WOW, I wonder what it would have looked like from a lower angle? |
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