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08/16/2009 04:12:08 PM |
Greetings from Andi via the Critique Club and congratulations on this top ten image!
First Impression: A well exposed sky and you did a decent job of exposing the rest of the shot though its still a little dark at the edges for me.
Composition: Considering the planter being in the way I think you did a great job of composing this shot but it looks as if it could do with being rotated half a degree to the left.
Subject: Fits the challenge well though it doesn't 'WOW' me (I gave it a 6 btw). Now, if there was a low flying aeroplane dead centre this would have ribboned :)
Technical: My only thought on the technical quality of this shot is maybe some light shadow/highlight or equivalent during post processing to get a little more details at the edges but, after saying that maybe it works better as it is.
Final thoughts: A great shot for the challenge. Maybe you could have squeezed most of this into a square crop? I love the shutters at various staged of being opened/closed. |
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08/12/2009 04:47:40 PM |
| I like it off-centered as it is. :o) |
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08/07/2009 09:14:19 PM |
| Nice colors and lighting, 6 |
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08/05/2009 03:05:39 PM |
| Not quite centered but still nice. |
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08/05/2009 01:29:59 AM |
| great idea, but you're not quite centered under the square. |
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08/05/2009 01:12:42 AM |
| I really like the perspective, lighting, and that you were fortunate enough to have an interesting sky. |
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