Greetings from Andi via the Critique Club
First Impression: This seems to be a very busy image and I find my eyes flitting from place to place never really settling on anything in particular apart from the bird droppings.
Composition: Well, you were in a moving tram so you were really stuck for moving around to get a better angle. The main focus is on the front dome but its a little central for my liking and think if you managed to capture the big wheel between the domes things would look a lot better. You could also have cropped out the foreground to where the main dome starts,
Subject: Yes, I can see cirlces (or parts of them) so this meets the challenge but doesn't go further than that for me sorry
Technical: A decent sky and the exposure doesn't have any major issues though the overall image is a little flat, lacking contrast and doesn't 'pop'. I don't think you needed F/22 here nomatter what end of the zoom you were on.
Final thoughts: As a reminder of your day out this is a keeper so if thats what you were aiming to achieve then your work is done :) |
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