DPChallenge: A Digital Photography Contest You are not logged in. (log in or register
 
Challenge Entries
Portfolio Images
This image is not part of a public portfolio.
The Old Inlet Pumphouse
The Old Inlet Pumphouse
totaldis


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Free Study 2009-07 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Lens: Sigma 10-20mm f/4-5.6 EX DC HSM for Canon
Location: Singer Island, FL
Date: Jul 26, 2009
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/100
Galleries: Architecture, High Dynamic Range (HDR)
Date Uploaded: Jul 29, 2009

First entry since coming back to DPChallenge... we'll see how it does.

Statistics
Place: 258 out of 419
Avg (all users): 5.5232
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 5.4425
Avg (non-participants): 5.7632
Views since voting: 586
Views during voting: 227
Votes: 151
Comments: 2
Favorites: 0


Please log in or register to add your comments!

AuthorThread
08/10/2009 01:57:08 PM
Greetings from Andi via the Critique Club. Welcome back Aaron and congratulations on submitting to 50 challenges!

First Impression: Just as Enzo (your sole commenter) says, interesting subject. All the elements seem to work well together but for me there is something missing in order to give this that WOW factor that the voters want (especially in a free study). Its a decent shot and my mind wanders along the water chute wondering where the water might end up.

Composition:A strong composition that allows the water to flow into the water chute thingy.

Subject: Yup, its interesting, it must be a pretty strong pump as swimmers are advised to stay 75 feet away. The two small objects on the horizon are a bit of a distraction for me and as they don't really add to the image think you'd have been safe removing them. I like the pumps reflection and shadow in the water. The sky in amongst the wires seems odd to me, almost as is if a couple of sections have been edited but not all of them? The aged pumphouse looks like a great subject to photograph.

Technical: The exposure is ok but maybe a little flat, is the vignetting from post processing or from the lens at 10mm? Maybe a slightly different angle as the pump house is suffering from a ultra wide angle and looks lob sided and I keep getting drawn to the sky on the right side of the pump.

Final thoughts: Its a decent image (I gave it a 6) and considering it was submitted to a free study think it finished about right and its not a bad score.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/05/2009 09:30:43 AM
interesting subject matter
  Photographer found comment helpful.


Home - Challenges - Community - League - Photos - Cameras - Lenses - Learn - Prints! - Help - Terms of Use - Privacy - Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2019 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Proudly hosted by Sargasso Networks. Current Server Time: 04/24/2019 11:56:52 AM EDT.