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If you're looking for a more constructive critique, I would say the biggest thing for me is the lighting. It's a bit harsh, so maybe try using a diffuser, it doesn't have to be anything fancy, and old sheet will do the trick. Also there are shadows in the eyes. The eyes are usually the most important part of a portrait, so I would try moving the light/or model, so some light fills in the shadows around the eyes. One more thing. For me personally it looks like the magazine takes up to much of the picture, so I would either back up a bit, or lower the magazine a tad. I hope this is helpful. |
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