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07/28/2009 11:39:26 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, this is a very interesting image and a creative take on the challenge. The repeating face almost gives a sense of the day after day routine that many women do. The squarish crop makes it feel a touch static, I think.
Technically, I think you have done well at making the skin tones and other colors work, and her eyes are captivating. I think the single drawback, as someone mentioned, was the feeling of a lack of focus. It appears that the eye in the "middle face" is the most focused, but the others aren't quite as much so.
Again, you have met the challenge and met the challenge well. Best to you in future challenges.
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07/24/2009 04:51:16 PM |
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07/23/2009 11:43:16 AM |
| I've seen images before along this line, that are really utter crap. You've pulled this one off though, you've done it well, and it works. Nice job. |
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07/20/2009 11:21:39 PM |
| needs focus in the foregroud, cool idea |
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