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07/22/2009 03:21:54 PM |
Originally posted by Ecce Signum:
Greetings from the Critique Club Maria.
First off welcome to DPC and congratulations on entering your first 2 challenges, its quite a step to parade your work to the dpc masses (we are a fickle bunch sometimes).
I didn't vote in this challenge but would have probably voted this a 4. I like the perspective, the bikes, balloons and the group at the table, but, as a single image its a little messy. Your focus is a little out for my liking and as another commenter mentioned this might work better in colour? Of course, I don't know what lengths you went to in order to take the shot but feel a closer crop on any of the 3 main subjects might have worked better.
That said, you scored a 4.8 on your first challenge so thats a full 0.6 better than me lol. Good luck for the future here at DPC and above all enjoy your photography! |
Ciao Andi,
thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate your suggestions and, above all, thank you for encouraging me. I hope that you will take a look again to my pictures in the future, and tell me what you think about.
Write to you soon!
Maria |
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07/20/2009 07:11:13 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club Maria.
First off welcome to DPC and congratulations on entering your first 2 challenges, its quite a step to parade your work to the dpc masses (we are a fickle bunch sometimes).
I didn't vote in this challenge but would have probably voted this a 4. I like the perspective, the bikes, balloons and the group at the table, but, as a single image its a little messy. Your focus is a little out for my liking and as another commenter mentioned this might work better in colour? Of course, I don't know what lengths you went to in order to take the shot but feel a closer crop on any of the 3 main subjects might have worked better.
That said, you scored a 4.8 on your first challenge so thats a full 0.6 better than me lol. Good luck for the future here at DPC and above all enjoy your photography!
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07/13/2009 10:04:45 PM |
| Challenge Relevance:7 Impact/Emotion/Mood:5 Technicals:5.5 Processing:5 Creativity:5.5 |
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07/10/2009 07:23:26 PM |
Unusual. A little more crispness and this would really pop.
Nice to see this very good creativeness. |
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07/10/2009 03:29:04 PM |
| Could be tighter on composition. Also, I just think the subject is a bit messy for a challenge. 4. |
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07/09/2009 08:34:46 PM |
| Really cool. I love the motorcycle with the sidecar as the balloon caddy. |
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07/08/2009 10:08:33 AM |
| interesting... i do long for color in this pic for some reason - tho i see the creativity of the B&W (where's the beer? LOL -- minute maid is a juice isn't it?) LoL interesting crop/shapes created here too i like the texture of brick / leather seat/ umbrella) |
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