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Looking up, looking down!!
Looking up, looking down!!
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Challenge: From Above II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Lens: Tamron AF 55-200mm F4-5.6 LD Di-II for Canon
Location: Panama City beach
Date: Jul 4, 2009
Aperture: 7.1
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/320
Galleries: Animals, Water
Date Uploaded: Jul 7, 2009

 Clicking a catch from a fisherman, he got three in a single line, the middle one was most sharp, so cropped a bit and posted. Hope some people like it

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Place: 72 out of 141
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 07/19/2009 07:48:39 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Initial impression: clever and unusual pov for the shot.

Technical: dof good, composition good but could've been strengthened by cropping out the other fish in upper left.

Artistic: LOVE the different pov you got here on the fish. The green water surrounding it catches the light well and helps illuminate subject.

Overall: A good shot, but can see why it finished just below 50%. Even though you wouldn't have been able to clone out other fish in Basic editing, could've cropped it so fishing line would help form a leading line up to left corner. Better to have just one strong subject in a shot than try to include a second one that may detract.

FWIW: A tiny hit of unsharp mask and sharpen edges, following resizing, may help your subject pop a little more. If you have these editing tools, try them out and see.

Feel free to PM me any questions,

Susan
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/13/2009 10:04:19 PM
Challenge Relevance:7 Impact/Emotion/Mood:5 Technicals:5.5 Processing:5.5 Creativity:5
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 07/10/2009 01:57:37 AM
but look at the size of the one that got away! ;-)
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 07/09/2009 08:29:19 PM
Yummmm Yellowtail! Cool shot. I actually like that you can only see part of the upper fish.
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 07/08/2009 12:27:44 AM
Tough to understand what perspective I'm looking at. Half crop of the other fish is distracting.
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