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The Jaguar in the attic
The Jaguar in the attic
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Challenge: Old Cars (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D40
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX NIKKOR 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G ED VR II
Location: Hallville, ONT
Date: Jun 23, 2009
Aperture: f14
ISO: 200
Shutter: 10
Galleries: Vintage, Emotive
Date Uploaded: Jun 23, 2009

It really is an old Jag that was last driven 30 yrs ago. I believe he said it was an SE 1 but don't quote me on that! There were many old cars of British make on the lot, but this old beaut truly was in the attic, as soon as I saw it I knew I had to make it mine...through my lens, if nothing else :-) Did have to work with the ambient lighting and chunks of clutter surrounding the Jag, but I think that only drives home that it truly is in an attic.


pp: RAW to TIFF, shadows/highlights, curves, contrast, crop, desat, exposure, resize, usm, sharpen edges, save for web

Statistics
Place: 87 out of 103
Avg (all users): 4.8708
Avg (commenters): 6.3333
Avg (participants): 4.5000
Avg (non-participants): 4.9853
Views since voting: 769
Views during voting: 302
Votes: 178
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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07/01/2009 08:49:58 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club

My first thought after seeing the title was "how did they get it up in an attic?" but you mention old British cars in the lot, so I guess this is a dealer's attic, which maybe has access for cars? It doesn't look like they have touched it for quite some time with all the dust on it. It's a shame, with some time and money this car could really look nice. It's a nice find, in a place you wouldn't normally look.

Now, on to the photograph. It's cropped very tightly, maybe because that's all the room you had to back up in the attic? Some more space on the right would have been good, and if they would let you move that piece of metal on the left edge to clear the fender would help also. Some other pieces sort of blend into the car also, but since it wasn't yours to move around you probably did the right thing by not overextending your privileges to get into the attic.

You did well with the long shutter speed and small aperture. I imagine there was not a lot of light in the attic, and you got good DOF with those exposure settings. It would be nice to get the shadows off the front but without additional lighting and in Basic editing you couldn't do that.

I like the detail you got in this less than ideal setting. Everything from the swirls on the body to the dirt on the floor came out very clearly. You chose an excellent shooting position, taking advantage of the light above to the right and getting a very nice perspective on the car body.

If you had an off-camera flash or a reflector to bounce back some of the light to the front bumper area I think it would have helped. The B&W processing works very well here.

A pretty good shot that should have probably scored higher than it did. Keep it up. PM me if you want to discuss further.
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07/01/2009 04:53:27 AM
Over in your neck of the woods that would be an XKE series 1.
Over here where they were made they were simply E-Type... nice image
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07/01/2009 12:46:34 AM
Ouch. I gave it a 6, if that helps any.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/30/2009 05:28:35 PM
Wow, incredible dust :-) ->That´s OLD!
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06/30/2009 01:42:50 PM
How do you get it up that little staircase?
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06/29/2009 09:00:38 PM
Who keeps a car in the attic?
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06/26/2009 11:46:14 AM
I know that you are going for the effect of "in the attic" but IMHO this is to dark and hazy for me...
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06/25/2009 12:11:43 PM
wow.. stripped right down!.. the shot is a little flat though.. maybe better cropping and a different aperture choice could have helped your photo.
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