Greetings from Critique Club.
Well, as both of the other commenters have said, this is a very nice candid shot. The little girl seems very comfortable with being in front of the camera.
From a technical point of view, I wonder if the DOF is just a little bit too shallow. It may have worked better if more of Caroline was in focus.
I also find the white balance to be a little bit off. This may just be my personal preference but I feel it is just a little bit too warm. A bit cooler, only a tiny bit mind you, may work better. Also, I think the image is slightly overexposed. I don't know if you were intentionally aiming for that, but if not, then I think a slight adjustment to brightness may have helped.
Overall, I thought this was a pleasant well done image, but probably lacking the DPC WoW factor to score much higher than it did in a free study. |
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