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06/08/2009 01:36:47 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
While this is not the classical Still Life shot, is certainly does meet the challenge.
My first impression is a feeling of cramped; too tight of a crop.
A bit more space would have been nice. The lighting is good. I especially like the flare up top, as it makes the viewer think of a spirit hovering over that which has been left behind.
The table does look a bit cluttered. A more striking image may have been presented by removing all but one or two objects on the table. The spoon on the floor is good...leave that!
Overall an interesting shot. Keep on shooting. I look forward to seeing more from you. |
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06/02/2009 11:04:53 AM |
| It's not really my interpretation of what 'Still Life' should be |
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05/30/2009 02:35:25 PM |
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05/27/2009 03:20:01 PM |
| I think there is just a little too much clutter here. It's hard to know what to rest my eye on. But, the lighting looks good, and I like the colors in the picture. |
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