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05/28/2009 04:37:42 PM |
nice title and composition.
p.s. yeah it does look a little lacking in punch .. |
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05/28/2009 04:32:06 PM |
| i like how your characters are lining up to make for an absurd story line/plot. i'm just not sure whether it's going to be drama or comedy... |
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05/21/2009 09:48:21 PM |
| Love all the lines everywhere, and the repeating people as well. To my eyes, the front couple seem to lack a little contrast, perhaps a local boost would give them a little more pop. |
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05/21/2009 11:03:38 AM |
Hi Deb
Can't comment as to B&W technique, but think the couple looks sufficiently highlighted..what grabbed my eye was the contrast (no pun intended) b/tw the youth of the gal in the floor poster and the couple, surrounded by all that geometry..including the workers all matching in their black outfits and adding those vertical "lines" with the ladders and columns.
wow, I need another cup of coffee!
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05/21/2009 05:51:54 AM |
| It looks somewhat flat, but I don't know how to add more contrast without overreacting. Nice gradients on the columns. Perhaps a square crop? Although that would add a lot of attention to the leg between the couple. |
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05/20/2009 03:58:41 PM |
Yeah, and it's too busy and I don't know what I'm supposed to be looking at and it doesn't fit the challenge and where's the instruction manual and why do they always write those things in languages I don't understand?
Oh.
It's tricky. A higher contrast would be typically 'right' for the photograph as an abstraction, but the couple that are hogging the discourse are (quint?)essentially quiet and calm, something with which jazzed up contrast would clash.
It's a lovely picture, you're on a calm and quiet roll with these.
PS - Wings of Desire?
Message edited by author 2009-05-20 16:07:01. |
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05/20/2009 03:39:19 PM |
| I find it just right. You could go heavier contrast to make it more 1x'ey. But I like it as it is. |
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