| Author | Thread |
|
|
05/27/2009 08:51:38 AM |
| Reasons this fell short, hmm, I think shooting this with a longer lens would have been a good start. This would compress her featrues a bit, as is her head seems pretty large compared to her body. The brightest spot, or at least largest is right on her chest, this draws attention away from what should be the focus, her face. Just a couple thoughts |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
05/26/2009 11:39:47 PM |
| I like the focus in this but her body is a bit distracting. Too many things to focus on. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/26/2009 09:14:25 AM |
| Hmmmmm. Maybe if the dress, lip color, eye shadow and background complemented or contrasted each other more strongely I would like this image more. Still a good shot. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/21/2009 04:34:51 PM |
| very polished shot - the rich purple top really gives this a glamourous look |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/20/2009 12:53:57 PM |
| Is "Deep Purple" the subject matter we should be interested in here? Your model is very attractive and doesn't need the "sex sells" approach IMO. You've done a very nice job with lighting and all technical aspects of this challenge entry. Good luck. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/20/2009 05:04:03 AM |
| Including her legs and hand in such a fragmented way weakened what I think is a fabulous portrait. I would maybe have cropped 1/2 way up into her right breast. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Prints! -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2024 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/18/2024 09:59:26 PM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
