A different idea. I am really not sure about the black side borders. To me they seem to make the rest of the picture look even lighter. As a result, my first impression was overexposed, yet as you look closer, it is very high key, but the details for the most part are still, to an extent, preserved.
The writing looks awkward by its positioning. The right choice of colour, but it just doesn't look right in that position, not that I can see a better spot though....... |